pkachu drinks a hrlm shak EGORAPTER IS WRITTEN ALL OVER this...
Very good animation but plenty of room for improvement.
Bumming the palette off of Erin exceptionally helped convey a parody
feeling and was an awesome idea. Very easy to tell the link.
I was impressed by the level you were willing to create the scene,
especially the buzz of the freezers. It really established the setting
well.
ALTHOUGH...
Even for comedic effect, it sorta looked like you half-assed slowpoke,
and I wouldn't recommend drawing things badly to be funny unless
it is very different comparatively to the rest of your animation. This
wasn't.
The text jitter that was going on really fucked up the zooms and the
panning and I hope you find a way to solve it.
Some of the out of focus/bokeh/blurred shots felt awkward, was
this a virtual cam's work or did you blur the layers yourself?
In either case you should work on improving that.
I enjoyed this and will be waiting for more, good job.
-Squidy